Songs for Sharks

[Krahs]

Been working with fruity loops recently, made a few song things, feed back is appreciated.
 

[WeaponTheory]

I like the ambience feel to it. The second video is a bit ear rapey when that one whiney sound drops in, and I feel that it needs some drums, I don't mean rocking out but something kicking/banging every now and then.

[Krahs]

Is it a bad sound or is it all just too loud? And thanks.

[WeaponTheory]

I think it's a little too loud, after the low BWAUMM sound (which is fine), it goes up some high notes and that's when it sounds too whiney/annoying. Me personally, I would tone down the pitch/notes.

There's possibly another factor too, like maybe it sounds too naked alone, I personally would either change the pitch at that part and/or add something with it (or at least later so the track isn't totally repetitive)
I dunno, my two cents. Music is subjective and all that jazz.

[Krahs]

I've been working on aphotic more , is this starting to sound any better?

http://www.newgrounds.com/projects/audio...56/preview

[WeaponTheory]

Much better. It doesn't sound annoying now that it's mixed with other sounds behind it.

Now about the new part. Whole different story.

The new sudden added pauses segments. I think it takes the focus off especially since it's there far longer than it should. It's kinda like being ear cocked blocked. Your new revised segment sounds better now, and then that happens.

My opinion of options of that new pauses segment. Remove it, or if you really like it, keep the first 20 or 21 (whatever so the loop pattern isn't fucked) seconds of your new segment then change it up. Either add drums or bring back some attention. Simply anything so that it's not repetitive.

[Krahs]

Okay, some final adjustments with what you said in mind.

http://www.newgrounds.com/projects/audio...27/preview

i'm hoping that this is pretty much final for that song, aside maybe being able to mix it better.

[WeaponTheory]

Well, it's better than before.

[Disk]

(09-24-2016, 08:52 PM)Krahs Wrote: Okay, some final adjustments with what you said in mind.

http://www.newgrounds.com/projects/audio...27/preview

i'm hoping that this is pretty much final for that song, aside maybe being able to mix it better.

I feel like there needs to be dialogue with this song.   "Welcome to your doom" *zoom in to Krahs* *starts battle*

Murphy's law is like an intro  to Aphotic

[WeaponTheory]

I figured Disk would like it.
I sampled a bit of Shark's audio just to test to see what could work for him and give him advice. I toyed with the pitch here and there and it totally sounds like something you would like when I added drums to it.
(Don't worry Shark, I didn't save it and upload it to somewhere)

@ Shark. What version of FL Studios are you using?